I'm from Belgium, so English poetry is a little hard to write me being Flemish and all, but I'll give it a try;

End of thoughts
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I can still smell you,
From the last time you were here.
I can still feel you trying,
To desperately catch my attention.

But the hurting I deserve
Still has to come.
In these turbulent times our heartbeats are limited
It's hard to overcome the loss...

Twisted thoughts are getting through,
My personal apocalypse
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Suggestions or anything are more than welcome, like I said; I could use some help every once in a while

jeeps
love these lines:
In these turbulent times our heartbeats are limited
It's hard to overcome the loss...
can so relate to that

where are u from in de vlaanders?

Koolkerke (near Bruges that is)
Thanks for the compliments on those lines man=)

haha doomchurch zalig
half uurtje ofzo van waar ik woon

Inderdaad, zoiets van diksmuide (mijn ex woont daar tevens:D)
But we all respect Hexfix and the rest of this forum, so we'll continue our discussions in English^^