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Winter Love (my poem for the season i guess)
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ZakkSt33l3
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Joined: Wed Sep 05, 2007 1:16 pm
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Location: Mapleton, Illinois
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 Winter Love (my poem for the season i guess) Love like winter
so bitter cold
I bite my tongue
but my lust numbs the pain
my body frozen within his presence
but all he offers is a chilling stare
like a mental game of cat and mouse
only the cat falls victim to the rodent
my mental state seems corroded
by situations of my hearts desire
with each dream I lose reality
driving my obsessions even further
twisting deeper into our tranquil realm
where we can be together
although he may resent my blissful offer
to much time and effort spent too accept rejection
~ZAKK St33l3
aka Spencer Closen
ps still working on it
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ZakkSt33l3
Cyber Communist
Joined: Wed Sep 05, 2007 1:16 pm
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Location: Mapleton, Illinois
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Re: Winter Love (my poem for the season i guess) ?nno? what and ahhh no dont compare it to AFI i only respect 1 of their albums Sing The Sorrow, and Davey is nice  met him after one of their shows with Dillinger Escape Plan <3 WHICH I LOVE BUT THANX
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~A Rose By Another Name~
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Joined: Sat May 12, 2007 12:36 pm
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Location: Barren Wasteland
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Re: Winter Love (my poem for the season i guess) Well, I think its purdy
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you're no more than a poem on a grave - a sideline for the guy who
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ZakkSt33l3
Cyber Communist
Joined: Wed Sep 05, 2007 1:16 pm
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Location: Mapleton, Illinois
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Re: Winter Love (my poem for the season i guess) Syphax wrote: i was watching Casper (olde cartoon) last night and now i know what the poem is ay bowt.
so, i apologixe, my perspective alows me to punkchewally spell things wrong and die from tyme tom time. (time to tyme as well) (and wall).
arr wee goodddd?>?>?>??>?>?>?>>?>?>?>??>>>...... lol yeah were good
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ZakkSt33l3
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Location: Mapleton, Illinois
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Re: Winter Love (my poem for the season i guess) ~A Rose By Another Name~ wrote: Well, I think its purdy well thanx
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ZakkSt33l3
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Location: Mapleton, Illinois
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Re: Winter Love (my poem for the season i guess) eh il check it out when i get home.
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